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Quick tip: How to make better lists

Every white paper includes a list or two.

No wonder. Lists have many benefits:

  • Lists help us compare and contrast
  • Lists gather together a lot of data
  • Lists can be scanned at a glance

Designers and UX researchers have known for decades that lists are a good way to “chunk” info into shorter pieces.

Those short chunks build comprehension and boost recall.

So lists are a vital element in any B2B content.

But are you making your lists as effective as possible?

Here are four tips to help you take charge of your lists.

Tip 1: Reorder your draft list

If you’re like most writers making a list, you just jot down items as they pop into your mind.

So the results often look unplanned and unfinished.

Instead of communicating at a glance, your list can make a reader pause to wonder what you’re trying to say.

For example, here’s a first draft list.


Our software runs on all popular operating systems: 

  • MacOS
  • Linux
  • Windows
  • ChromeOS

What does this order mean?

Was the product created first for MacOS and only recently ported to Windows? If you use Windows, does this list give you any confidence?

Here’s how I would rearrange this list.


Our software runs on all popular operating systems: 

  • Windows
  • MacOS
  • Linux
  • ChromeOS

The second draft is organized by installed base, with the most popular OS at the top and the least popular at the bottom. How sensible!

Always reconsider your first draft to see if you can make your list more clear.

Tip 2: Default to alphabetical order

If you have a jumbled list that you can’t figure out how to organize, use alphabetical order.

You can’t often go wrong by putting your items in order from A to Z.

This is how I usually start arranging any list of items. I recommend you do that as well. Make alphabetical your default arrangement.

Then no one will waste any time wondering if there’s a secret message buried in your list.

Tip 3: Choose the order that fits the material best

Sometimes alphabetical order isn’t the smartest way to organize your list.

Here are some other methods with an example of when to use each one.

Click here to download a PDF of this table for your reference.


OrderDefinitionExample
AlphabeticalA to ZNames in a directory
CategoricalTypes or groupsProducts in a store (Clothing, Electronics, Home, etc)
Chronological—First to last
—Old to new
—Company milestones
—Product releases
FrequencyCommon to rareItems in an FAQ
Geographical—Near to far
—Far to near
—Offices starting with HQ
—News from global to local
Hierarchical—Top down
—Bottom up
—Employees from CEO down
—Military ranks from private up
ImportanceMost to least importantKey features of a product
Numerical—Big to small
—Small to big
—Top 100 companies by revenue
—Units of data from bits up
Priority or Risk—High to low
—Low to high
—To-do list
—Simple things to try
ProcessFirst to lastSteps in a production process
Value or Cost—High to low
—Low to high
—Items from premium to budget
—Items by cost

Tip 4: Tell readers your method

Don’t make your readers guess how your list is arranged.

Tell them explicitly how you set out each list. That only takes a short phrase.

For example, the three or four words in bold are all you need:

Here are the top 10 questions our support team gets in order of frequency:

Our significant donors for the year, in alphabetical order, include:

From start to finish, there are four main steps in this process:

The top 10 companies in our niche by last year’s revenues are:

See how brief that can be? Yet it can save your readers a world of guesswork.

Conclusion

So those are my four tips on making better lists:

  • Reorder your draft list
  • Default to alphabetical order
  • Choose the order that fits the material best
  • Tell readers your method

By applying these tips, you can transform your lists from chaotic jumbles into powerful structures that enhance your B2B content.

 


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About Gordon Graham

Worked on 323 white papers for clients from Silicon Valley to Switzerland, on everything from choosing enterprise software to designing virtual worlds for kids, for clients from tiny startups to 3M, Google, and Verizon. Wrote White Papers for Dummies which earned 60+ 5-star ratings on Amazon. Won 16 awards from the Society for Technical Communication. Named AWAI 2019 Copywriter of the Year.

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