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Quick tip: Make friends with your designer

text "thrown over the wall" from writer to designer

When working with a designer, many writers just “throw their text over the wall.” They never talk to the designer who will work with that text. Yet somehow, they expect the designer to figure out what they want to see. This lack of communication can lead to some awful results, including white papers that are…

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Quick tip: Think outside the list

an aardvark, a popular mascot for companies that want to game alphabetical listings

In an earlier tip, I described how to write better lists. But sometimes a list isn’t the best approach. Sometimes redoing a disorganized list as sentences makes it work better. I admit, this doesn’t happen every day. But here’s an example from the real world to show you what I mean. One of my B2B…

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Quick tip: Read your draft to your SMEs

read a white paper out loud

Did you ever work with a SME who kept putting off reviewing a white paper draft? Maybe English wasn’t their first language. Or maybe they weren’t sure how to express their comments on your draft. But they were too embarrassed to admit it. Here’s a smart way around that: 1. Schedule a meeting or Zoom,…

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Quick tip: Make every bullet count

photo of a row of bullets

There’s nothing like a set of bullets to make a list easy to scan. But are your bulleted lists as sharp as they could be? Here are four tips to help make every bullet count. Tip 1: Order bullets for quick scanning It’s obvious how to arrange a set of bullets, right? You put the…

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Quick tip: Fix a draft white paper that’s too short

one draft too short, one just right

So you’ve written a draft white paper, but it’s way too short. Now your reviewers and your sponsor are complaining. Can you expand it? Yes, you can. And here are some practical tips on how. But first, check out these one-page “white papers” What do you think? Are they long enough to be convincing? Or…

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Quick tip: Fix a draft white paper that’s too long

one draft too long, one just right

So you’ve written a draft white paper, but it’s way too long. Now your reviewers and your sponsor are complaining. So can you shorten a draft that’s way too long? Yes, you can. And here are five practical tips how. What’s too long, anyway? Technical people may read a white paper 30 or 40 pages…

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Quick tip: How to layer information for multiple audiences

multi-layer rainbow cake to signify layering information in a white paper

Ideally you can create one white paper for every segment of your target audience. But what if you can’t swing that? What if for some reason—time, money, or whatever—you need to reach more than one audience with the same white paper? In another article, I described how to “clone” one basic document for various segments…

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